（江苏专用）2019_2020学年高中英语Unit1GettingalongwithothersPeriodSixWriting—Writingaletterforhelp课件牛津译林版必修5.pptx

,,,,,Getting along with others,Unit 1,,,,,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Six Writing—Writing a letter for help,,PART1,,技法点拨,,,文体分析 把握写作动脉,求助信是向收信人陈述写信人所遇到的疑惑或困境，希望对方能根据所述情况给出合理可行的看法或建议，因此应用一般现在时表达文意。当描述自己得到帮助后将要取得的进步时应当改用一般将来时表达文意。同学们一定要牢记求助信的这些时态特点，并增强错误防范意识，养成错误防范习惯，确保语言的准确性。 求助信的写作步骤： 首段：简单介绍自己并表明写作意图。 主体段落：陈述自己所面临的困难。 结尾段：对提出的要求进行总结，展望获得帮助后自己的进步并希望对方方便时能早日给予回复。,◆写作指导,友情提醒：写作这类题目时，考生要注意语气委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言特点。多变式使用委婉用语，提高文章整体美感以达到有效交流的目的。,1.做自我介绍时： (1)My name is.I’m writing to you for some help. (2)I’m writing a letter to you hoping to get some help. 2.简要交代自己所面临的困难时： (1)I have met much difficulty/trouble/a problem with sth. /in doing sth. (2)Faced with so much difficulty，I have to ask you for some help.,◆常用表达,3.请求对方做某事时： (1)Would you like to.so that.? (2)In the meanwhile/At the same time，I beg you to.so that. (3)Also，I would like you to. 4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时： (1)I’m sure with your help I can make great progress. (2).so that./.in order that.,,PART2,,写作训练,,,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假如你是李华，明年即将进入大学学习，但是不知道该如何适应大学的生活。请你就以下大学新生活中常遇到的情况给某大学的校长写一封100词左右的求助信，信中包括以下内容： 1.在生活中不会照顾自己； 2.感到孤独，经常想家； 3.财物容易丢失； 4.对食物、气候不适应； 5.有些学生因不合群而在校外租房居住。 注意： 1.词数150左右； 2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。,写作要求是写一封求助信，写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。 2.主体时态：一般现在时、一般将来时。 3.主体人称：第一、二人称。,◆审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.向您寻求……的建议或忠告 _________________________ 2.使某人自己适应新生活 ________________________ 3.照顾自己 _________________ 4.感到孤独 _________ 5.想家 ____________ 6.(食物、气候等)相宜，适宜 _________ 7.在校外租房居住 ________________ 8.不合群 __________________________,查看答案,ask you for some advice on.,adapt oneself to the new life,take care of oneself,feel lonely,feel homesick,agree with,live out of campus,◆遣词造句,feel uneasy to live with others,句式升级 1.据说，大部分大一新生无法适应环境的突然变化。most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know .(It’s said that句型，how to do作宾语)Most freshmen confused by the sudden change of their environment， how to deal with it.(sb. be said to be/do，现在分词作状语),查看答案,It’s said that,how to deal with it,are said to be,not knowing,2.他们甚至因不适应食物、气候而生病。They even fall ill the new climate and food don’t agree with them.(simply because)The new climate and food don’t agree with them，____________________.(非限制性定语从句，lead to加复合宾语) 3.有些学生因不合群而在校外租房居住。Some students out of campus.(定语从句，prefer to do)Some students live out of campus for they feel uneasy to live with others.(would rather do sth. ，tend to),查看答案,simply because,which sometimes even,leads to their falling ill,who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live,would rather,tend to,Dear President， I’m a Senior 3 student and I’m going to university next year.But I’m worried about the university life and I’m afraid I can’t adjust to the new environment. So I am writing to ask you for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time. Most freshmen are said to be confused by the sudden change of their environment，not knowing how to deal with it. They can’t take care of themselves and always feel lonely and homesick. What is more，they may sometimes lose their money，mobile phones and many other things.,查看答案,◆组句成篇,